Week 1 Story: Lessons from the Silver Man
Deep in the heart of the Eastwoods, where weeping, willowy
trees can barely be seen through the dense fog, is a petite, wooden cottage
paved with cobblestone. Inside the cold, mysterious, and barren cottages lives
the silver haired man. The sound of the creaking old chair echoing off the
walls signaled the beginning of the elderly man’s daily routine- his only
routine. Every day for hours, the silver haired man wrapped in luxurious linens
leans back with eyes closed, humming the tune to inaudible music.
This is the only image that replays in the mind of the villagers that inhabit
Westwood, a town at the edge of the swamp that intersects both Westwood and
Eastwood. All other talk concerning the silver haired man is hushed. Only the
curious and adventurous villagers dare to cross the swamp and peak into the
dust collecting window of the silver-haired man, but foreigners peering into
window is the greatest extent in which the villagers will excavate to learn
more about this legend. A legend? Yes, the silver-haired man is known to be enlightened.
Every four years, men and women in the Eastwood village reproduce children that
intellectually, emotionally, and physically advanced; however, there are only a
few, meaning two to three that possess this divergence from the monotony of the
rest of the village. At the peak of adolescence these children are tasked to
visit and learn to hone their skill from the enlightened.
Image Information to Left: Cottage in the Woods
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The fourth year of nature’s gifting was upon the village. This
was the year that a family in Eastwood would bare a divergent child or
children. Following the fourth year, the prophecy was revealed. A small family
in a small thatched roof home at the edge of Eastwood, sagging by the bank of
the swamp received the blessing of two advanced and gifted boys. The village
was envious as the recipients of the
enlightened infants contributed least to
the village and mingled less often with other families. The parents were
overjoyed and sheltered their children as much as possible by isolating them
from the rest of the village.
The adolescence age was finally upon the two boys, Belo and
Javi. It was on their fourteenth birthday that Belo and Javi awoke from a dream
that drew them to a cottage in the woods. Without a single idea as to why they
were driven to a random cottage, both Belo and Javi, that night, traversed
through the swamps and the dark woods to find the cobblestone drive. The minute both young men planted their feet on the hardened stone pathway, their tests and training began. From the cottage, the silver-haired man, hunched over, immediately gave them their first task with the rhyme; "skillful though you may be, bring me what fills thee." Dramatic emphasis was place on the words thee as the silver haired man pointed to the cottage. Both Javi and Belo stood confused, but they used their analytical skills and ventured far to find answers. Two days later, both boys returned tattered, bruised, and filled with anger. On their journey, they lost sight of the task and focused on measuring and comparing their abilities to each other. Furthermore, the silver-haired man greeted their return with these words," Treacherous and awful. Both of you have wronged me. I find this punishment fit; you shall see." Immediately, Javi and Belo dropped dead.
Author's Note:
This story was inspired by an Indian Fable, The Wise Man and His Two Pupils. The original fable focused on the lesson that tow pupils of a wise, older man taught the pupils. The pupils had the same task to find an item that would fill his dark room. Each pupil returned with items that filled the room; however, one pupil excelled over the other by bringing back a more reliable source, light. The wise man wanted the children to know the proper way to provide good means to an end. My story was influenced by the idea of a "wise or elderly man." I used the term silver haired as a representation of wisdom
Bibliography. "The Wise Men and His Two Pupils" from Indian Fables by Ramaswami Raju. Indian Fables Source
Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI really loved getting to read your story! It was a great way to turn an Indian fable into completely something else. I liked your usage of silver haired as a representation of wisdom. It seems like you really took the time to think this through! I also really like the layout of your page. It definitely drew me into your posts. The way you also outlined this specific post with the pictures on different sides of the panel definitely allowed the story to flow.
Hi Hannah! I’m so glad to be in a class with you after PLC two years ago! I hope you are doing well! I enjoyed reading your story. I specifically liked the symbolism used in your post. The images you picked went well with the story, as well. It’s a good reminder to listen to our elders with respect because they can teach us so much because they’ve lived longer and experienced more.
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ReplyDeleteYour story was very interesting to read. Is there a reason why you chose this story out of all the ones available to us? I do like calling the old wise man "silver man". Your pictures made the stories come alive. I think you are a really good story teller. The details you added in your story show a very vivid picture.
Mehik, thank you for your kind words. My choice to use this story was influenced by the title. When I saw the "wise man" and "two pupils," my mind immediately thought Karate Kid and Teenage Mutant Ninja Turtles. For some reason, I associated "wise man" with a trainer or sensai, someone with wisdom and knowledge of life. [
DeleteHannah, I loved how descriptive you were with setting the scene! I can almost see it now. So far this sounds similar to the Divergent movies in a way or like The Giver (book and movie). Especially towards the end of the story it sounds like The Giver. Young gifted man (men) learning from a mysterious and wise man that lives on the edge of town. The ending was shocking! I did not expect that at all. Very interesting story! You could maybe make some sequels out of it!
ReplyDeleteHey Hannah! This story was awesome! I like how you used the idea of silver hair as an analogy for wisdom. I enjoyed the story and the flow of it, especially with all the symbolism within the narration. Although it is slightly late in the semester, I think you could totally write more stories off of this one. Overall, great work!
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